With A Sunset (Poem of the Week ~ 6/4/06)
With A Sunset Leaning against the door frameholding myself,watching the coral sunset. Ive always worshiped the moon.Jan rarely missed a sunset. My tears have dried now. This is the first yearthe...
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Thank you so much Deb, it's so nice to see you again. I'm so sorry if you lost your sister as well...you don'trealize how much it will hurt until it happens. Red
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My heart aches to read this, and yet the way you've found to grace her memory is a simple and stunning beauty. In no way do I regret this read, for what better place to look for thoase whose time has...
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Congratulations, Red.Well-deserved! happy this week.Jan
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This was a very warm read as I remember.I'm glad it'll be around for awhile.Very worthy of the POW.
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Red, I am thrilled to congratulate you for this wonderful write. One of your best writes.Wanda
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Wow I never expected to win this!! Thank you all forthe encouragement. I love the way you displayed it as well. Red
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strong stuff here...toasting the sunset...a neat way to remember her....congrats on your award
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This really hits hard, that ending. I really felt it. Nicely done and congrats!Fiercest is the barkof the wolf in the fight.Lonesome is the cryin the dark of the night.The bark draws blood and the cry...
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Congratulations, Red This is such a warm, loving piece of writing. What a wonderful way to remember your sister.......toasting the sunset.~Alaura
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Joyce,Ah, just beautiful...it will be so nice coming back to this all week!Congratulations!Rich
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She'll stick around, as long as loved one's and friends remember, by then it'll be someone else's turn to remember us. I'm not happy for you Red, but I'm glad you won."I love being a writer, but I...
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Thank you all for your wonderful comments.. This poem is probably one of the closest to my heart. Red
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Rich it's so nice to see you again...seems like our old friends have scatter with the wind since B R closed.Red
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Red,What a lovely gem .Enjoyed !!!Congrads on the Pow award...Robert
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Wonderful writing, Red, and expressed so delicately through imagery. Congrats!~ Bruce
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This is so poignant Redstormy...a wonderful tribute to a sister who will live as long as you and those who loved her live. Regards,Maryse
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Red,I'm touched that your poem is now POTWfor it was born of love and grief and Istill believe that Jan knows of it too.SusanneThe Poet is always trying to explain the unexplainable. Dr. Alan Watts
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Hi RedStormy,without a superflous stroke of your pen, you have captured a rapture of wistfulness. It lingers like afterglow, and like the last tear that refused to fall.I've read this one several...
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